Hey man, found this webcomic through the links on your Amelia Rules video. Seems we share a similar passion for obscure animation and cartoonists, though you seem a bit further along the path of discovery than I am. I’ve never quite seen a premise like this before, where Mia’s foster parents know she’s a alien but don’t know she’s a grown ass woman, and I’ve found myself legit cracking up and invested in a lot of the writing, which I can’t say about a lot of webcomics I come across on random indie binges. Just wanted to say keep up the good work, and that you have a real knack for writing a story like this.
If I’m allowed to make a critque, I’d say that some line weight could help elevate the art in a subtle way. Simply making the lines around the characters and word bubbles could be enough. I’m excited to see where this story goes.
Hey man, found this webcomic through the links on your Amelia Rules video. Seems we share a similar passion for obscure animation and cartoonists, though you seem a bit further along the path of discovery than I am. I’ve never quite seen a premise like this before, where Mia’s foster parents know she’s a alien but don’t know she’s a grown ass woman, and I’ve found myself legit cracking up and invested in a lot of the writing, which I can’t say about a lot of webcomics I come across on random indie binges. Just wanted to say keep up the good work, and that you have a real knack for writing a story like this.
If I’m allowed to make a critque, I’d say that some line weight could help elevate the art in a subtle way. Simply making the lines around the characters and word bubbles could be enough. I’m excited to see where this story goes.
Thank you for your kind words! It means so much to me. Thank you also for the feedback, and I wish you well on your artist journey!